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Latest Flash Reviews

72 Reviews | 27 w/ Responses

Score: 0
MECHA OPS

"This is garbage"

submission: MECHA OPS
date: June 11, 2009

You do not post things here just to get some help, or to get advice. There are forums here which are meant for that. The Portal itself is for COMPLETE games ONLY.
To make a great game, you don't need newer Flash versions or anything!! Just work with what you have, and make a game!!! Blaming your bad games on old Flash is a worse excuse than age!

July 1, 2009

Author's Response:

it didn't blame it on my old flash version. i said some of the action script don't work. and some one sent me the action script so i can fix the game a lot so it will be upgraded alot. 2 do u have codes to give me. 3 your review is useless if it isn't constructive critisim.

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Score: 10
Random Hantai 5

"YESSS!!!"

submission: Random Hantai 5
date: November 6, 2008

At first I thought it will be another one of those fake ones, but I was gladly surprised to see the new and unique content to this really popular comic book style! Hentai comics are always pretty funny!

November 6, 2008

Author's Response:

thank you

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Score: 2
Ultra Wars-PREMIS

"Errr"

submission: Ultra Wars-PREMIS
date: November 2, 2008

Ok...it's not even that good of a start, since your code is very weak.
I try to help people new to Flash, so here it is again:
-Don't use duplicateMovieClip!!! NEVER! Always use attachMovie, with the bullet in the library with a linkage name. This way you don't need to have an instance on the stage, and it looks cleaner.
-Always write code on the frame, not on MovieClips. I think this is more of personal opinion, but it's essential when writing big games, otherwise you have code lying around in random movieclips, and if there's a problem, it's hard to find.
-Instead of putting _root["shoot"+i], assign a variable at first:
//You can copy paste from here on down-
newBullet = _root.attachMovie("bullet","bullet"+i ,i);
newBullet._x = 50;
newBullet._y = 50;
//And so on.
/*-For moving in the direction of the mouse, you need to get the radians from the degrees of _rotation:*/
newBullet.speed = 5;
newBullet._rotation = _rotation;
var radians = Math.PI/180*this._rotation;
/*Then use cosine and sine to get the correct values (the speed var isn't
necessary, but it's easier to change that once, than go looking for all the calculations.*/
newBullet.xSpeed = Math.cos(radians);
newBullet.ySpeed = Math.sin(radians);
newBullet.onEnterFrame = function () {
this._x += this.xSpeed*this.speed;
this._y += this.ySpeed*this.speed;
}
i++;
/////////////
If you copy and paste the above instead of what you have for shooting, it should work, you just need to go to your library and right-click on your bullet symbol, select linkage name, and call it bullet.

Anyways, I hope that helps. I usually don't go to all the trouble of writing code, but w/e, here it is, if it doesn't work, PM me.

P.

November 3, 2008

Author's Response:

thanks man

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Latest Audio Reviews

21 Reviews | 7 w/ Responses

Score: 10
VeXy - Mirage

"Amazing!"

submission: VeXy - Mirage
date: March 18, 2009

I've only heard your first 4 or so songs, so I probably skipped out on some of the development of your music, but this sounds so much more alive than the older ones, and seems to have more feeling to it!

I like the beginning of this one, it sounds very mysterious...very suitable for a horror game of some sort! I also like the sort of arabic sounding "trumpet" that intro's it into the first break down...

I'll have a listen to your other songs...and...it would be cool to have you see my latest song again. It's...well, it hasn't done too good with ratings, but I like listening to it anyhow...

P.

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Score: 9
The Tommy Song

"Good Job"

submission: The Tommy Song
date: January 7, 2009

Nice work.
I first heard this song on SoundClick.

The only problem with it is that I find that it never really goes anywhere, and just stays the same. The snare roll leading into the bass beat is very unsatifactory. Maybe add a bigger drum kit instead of just the bass...

And don't you need to pay on soundclick for this song?!

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Score: 10
VeXy - Moonlight

"Amazing!!!"

submission: VeXy - Moonlight
date: November 9, 2008

Your songs go right down my lane of favourite music!!! I'm downloading them now, and you can bet that you will hear some of them in my upcoming games!

Love your music!

ps:can you please check my tracks...I'm trying to get my music sounding nice, but people don't seem to like it...

P.

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